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Broken hearts they never mend
Bruised and tattered they beat within
Twisting and changing with every sin
Dealt or received they warp and bend

Until the day they feel nothing at all
No more pain
No more falls
No need for forgiveness
No way to forget
Too many wrongs
Emotionally spent

But a broken heart
Doesn't just quit
There's a longing
To feel something again

Because broken is better
Than emptiness
Feeling emotions
Is something we miss
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BeyondJen Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Broken is better than emptiness. Sooooo true. I'm a HUGE believer of that.
Nicely summed up there, Jay. It's always better to feel something, even pain, than nothing at all.
Keeps reminding us we're alive, eh?
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Jaybird101 Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2011
That's right, even pain reminds us we're alive and that's better than nothing at all. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment. I really appreciate it :)
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MisplacedFox Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2011
I L O VE THIS!!!!! WOWSER!!!!
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Jaybird101 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2011
Well thank you,
glad you enjoyed it :)
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MisplacedFox Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2011
NP ... thanks for writing it
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TheLunaLily Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
God damn...

that is so true.
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Jaybird101 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2011
Isn’t it though :)
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TheLunaLily Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Absofuckinlutely :nod:
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Jaybird101 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2011
Haha…love your choice of words ;) Thank you so much for the comment.
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TheLunaLily Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Ain't I a proper lady? :) lol

Your welcome! :heart:
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