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The morning sun beams through the front windshield like an intruder: brash and unwelcome forcing you to wake. Whiskey eyed, smelling like an ashtray, parked at the back end of a ghetto ass neighborhood, wondering what the hell you did the night before. Like trying to remember words you haven’t written yet. One thing is for certain: a little bit of rope goes a long way, but a lot of rope will hang you.
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Given 2013-08-16
Shockingly vivid and truthfully vulgar, One of those Nights by ~Jaybird101 tells a story and delivers a powerful punch in so few words. ( Featured by Nichrysalis )
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sober-living-again Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014
oh wow.
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Jaybird101 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014
Yeah, guess I've had a few of these nights. Glad you enjoyed it :)
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WinstonHarmony Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
wonderful. I remember those mornings all too well
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Jaybird101 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2013
Thanks, bro. Yeah I suppose its the nights we don't remember so well.
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madameshadowenn Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
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Jaybird101 Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2013
Thank you :)
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madameshadowenn Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
No problem at all!
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Laeneris Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013  Student Writer
Like trying to remember words you haven’t written yet.

Ah, yes. I think this is a brilliant summary of that kind of feeling. :D
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Jaybird101 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013
Well thank you :)
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Laeneris Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Student Writer
:aww:
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