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The morning sun
beams through the front windshield
like an intruder:
brash and unwelcome, forcing you to wake.

Whiskey eyed, smelling like an ashtray,
parked at the back end
of some ghetto ass neighborhood
wondering what the hell you did the night before.

It's like trying to remember words
you haven’t written yet.

One thing is for certain:
a little bit of rope goes a long way,
but a lot of rope
will hang you.
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Given 2013-08-16
Shockingly vivid and truthfully vulgar, One of those Nights by ~Jaybird101 tells a story and delivers a powerful punch in so few words. ( Featured by Nichrysalis )
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MyBlueBalloons Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014
oh wow.
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Jaybird101 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014
Yeah, guess I've had a few of these nights. Glad you enjoyed it :)
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WinstonHarmony Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
wonderful. I remember those mornings all too well
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Jaybird101 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2013
Thanks, bro. Yeah I suppose its the nights we don't remember so well.
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madameshadowenn Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hi there! I'm Jasmine, a staff blogger from :iconpoeticalcondition:. Just to let you know I've featured your piece in this journal: poeticalcondition.deviantart.c…
It's a round-up of all of our members who have received a DLD or DD over the past 9 days, so please do check it out!
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Jaybird101 Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2013
Thank you :)
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madameshadowenn Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
No problem at all!
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Laeneris Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2013  Student Writer
Like trying to remember words you haven’t written yet.

Ah, yes. I think this is a brilliant summary of that kind of feeling. :D
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Jaybird101 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013
Well thank you :)
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Laeneris Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2013  Student Writer
:aww:
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